‘Doe Eyes’ is a poem that talks about the moment when your inner walls crumble, when the inner child meets the guilt, silence and exhaustion, giving way to remembrance and yearning for the original innocence. It’s about embracing vulnerability and finding ‘home’ not in escape, but in emotional truth.
you’ve captured something truly special. Thank you for sharing such heartfelt words.
This piece reads like a meditation on recognition of innocence, pain, and healing converging. The imagery of mirrors, dust, time, and glow gives it an ethereal quality. The poem’s rhythm feels organic, like thought breaking through stillness. It evokes both loneliness and rebirth.
Perfect balance of imagination and symbolism , emotional resonance. The voice feels introspective and spiritual, detached yet deeply feeling.
Well done, eagerly waiting for more creative pieces…